How To Write Effective Emails As A Manager

Everyone uses email.

For any role, including management, it will be your most used communication method.

Learn when to email, and how to email well.

When Should You Use Email?

The first thing to consider is, “Are emails the right way to communicate this?”

Every method of communication has its benefits and drawbacks. 

Think about what you want to communicate.

This will help you determine whether writing an email is the best course of action.

For non-urgent, everyday issues that don’t require discussion, email is likely to be the ideal choice.

Emails are quick, simple and efficient for getting your message across.

Iit can save you time that can be spent on more pressing matters.

If the issue requires detailed discussion and listening to others views, a meeting is a better choice.

The difficulty in conveying tone and empathy in an email is also worth considering. 

Finally, remember that emails can be pretty ‘cold’ ways to communicate. 

Phone calls and face-to-face meetings are better for forming close relationships with your colleagues.

If you are dealing with people you are still getting to know, then a call or meeting may be a better choice.

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6 Tips For More Persuasive Emails

Once you’ve decided to write an email:

Think about how best to present it and communicate yourself.

Here are six tips to make sure that your emails have maximum impact!

1. Think Hard About Your Subject Line

Your subject line should convey as much meaningful information as possible in as few words as possible.

It should be short and make clear what the email is about. 

If there is a call to action, try to include it in the subject line.

2. Be Clear

You need to clearly explain what you expect from the recipient.

This way they understand the specific outcome you have in mind.

Wherever possible, mention this outcome at the start of your email so that the reader doesn’t miss it if they skim-read the email!

Alternatively, highlight this key section using bold or italics to make it hard to miss. 

3. Keep It Short And Interesting

Avoid extraneous information.

Long-winded emails are likely to be skimmed or even ignored entirely. 

Write emails that are as short as possible while still covering all the key information.

If you have to write a longer email, make sure to keep it interesting.

This is also a key skill for managers, read our assertiveness tips for managers here!

4. Tailor your emails

If you know the recipient of your email, tailor your style to their style. 

Some people like formal emails. Others are much more relaxed. 

Matching your recipient’s style will get their attention and make your email more persuasive. 

5. Emphasise The Positives

If you’re making a request, use social proof to your advantage.

Highlight the positive responses others have given to the idea!

If the recipient knows that others will see the benefits of your proposal, they are more likely to believe in it and agree. 

6. Get Your Facts Right

Providing evidence to back up your words is a simple way to ensure that your emails are persuasive.

This will back up your argument and give the impression that you have a firm grip on the details of the subject.

Being professional and effective on emails is an important skill we also learn on our manager courses.

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3 Mistakes To Avoid

As with all communication, there are also some basics that you must avoid to make sure your emails have an impact.

1. Don’t ignore the basics

Get the basics right. 

Make sure your punctuation and spelling (especially the recipient’s name!) are correct. 

Getting this wrong distracts from your main message and damages your credibility.

74% of people say these types of errors damage an authors’ credibility (Source: Investment Writing).

2. Never email when you’re in a negative frame of mind

Everyone experiences frustration or anger while at work sometimes. 

This may or may not be work-related.

Regardless, it will come across in your emails, just as it would in your voice.

If you’re having a frustrating time, go for a walk or try another way to shift the feeling before emailing.

Sending emails when you’re in a negative frame of mind will only reduce their impact. 

3. Stay professional

Criticising, gossiping and moaning should all be avoided.

People can fall into the trap of writing things that they’d never say out loud. 

Keep your emails professional. 

If you’re unsure whether to send an email, sleep on it.

Review it in the morning to see if you still think it would be a good idea to send it.  

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Conclusion

Email is overused. 

However, its prevalence means that mastering it will be important for you when learning to influence employees.  

Next time you sit down to write an email, take a few extra minutes to think through the steps above.

The results will more than justify the time it takes. 

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For more on manager skills, read our guide to handling difficult conversations here.

 

About Ben Richardson

Ben is a director of Acuity Training which he has been running for over 10 years.


He is a Natural Sciences graduate from the University of Cambridge and a qualified accountant with the ICAEW.


He previously worked as a venture capitalist and banker and so had extensive experience with Excel from building financial models before moving to learn SQL, Microsoft Power BI and other technologies more recently.